Friday, April 20, 2007

i'm really tired. from fyp and school first 2 days of school i got a C. how demoralising is that and its not that you nv put in work or we nv understand it. it just how FUCKING BIAS SOME FACI CAN BE.

Comments from Q (MR KIEW SIEN LIE)
You have done some good research work, but lifting passages directly from the net and pasting it into your slide and word document does not show how much of knowledge you have absorbed ... reading these cut and pasted findings during your slide presentation also does not help ... organize your findings and use your own words in future ... you presented samples of the tapestry during class, but it is not incorporated into the slides or word file when you submit to LEO .... did not follow through in tying up the loose ends of your presentation package ....Slide presentation wise, words without images does not appeal ... words with inappropriate images confuse (stain glass window out of a sudden) ...Good observation of the flashback device used in the tapestry.Group Grade: C+

Hi Harng,You were participative during 1st and 2nd meeting, but your response at times have an undertone of sarcasm ... it could be just the way you speak ...Do find out the meaning of flux before using the word so freely in your RJ ...How is your story idea any different from a regular X-men comic series or the recent popular TV series Heroes? You need a more creative angle and story twist (discovering her mutant power is no climatic twist) to tell another mutant story, else few will be appealed to your story ... need to think deeper ...Remember the length of your comic strip (at least 4 pages and not more than 12 pages) ... do you think what you have proposed can be contained in this limitation? Continue to develop details for your story idea ... daydream and sleep on it ...actual grade: C+

so u expect me to come up with a brand new idea by 1159? how clever. maybe u shld come do it.

Comments from EE SHAUN. (so far i think you are stuck in SQ 1, you are not doing anything either)
Start with analysis of the problem/brief. Good implementation of rubbish chute. Consider userability, and other prototypes if possible, and various configurations to improve mobility/stackability of your 2-storey toilet. Remember to research your subject matter. More drawings, different approaches to the problem, e.g. social approaches, environmental considerations etc. Fair effort.

maybe i shld not be in art and design, maybe media and entertainment will be better for me. i just cant stand these block head esp Q.

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